She's VERY beautiful. I think her face looks like she's either uncomfortable a little bit or like she's concentrating. She doesn't have that playful expression I'm used to seeing in your shots. Or maybe that "affect" is just more noticeable because we're looking at her from an elevated point of view rather than directly at her face.
I really like this picture. I don't have any problem with the eyes they look fine to me. I love the shapes and the fact that you have both mid tones and the extremes of black and white in the photo. It makes it seem that you are using the entire spectrum.