She's VERY beautiful. I think her face looks like she's either uncomfortable a little bit or like she's concentrating. She doesn't have that playful expression I'm used to seeing in your shots. Or maybe that "affect" is just more noticeable because we're looking at her from an elevated point of view rather than directly at her face.
I really like this picture. I don't have any problem with the eyes they look fine to me. I love the shapes and the fact that you have both mid tones and the extremes of black and white in the photo. It makes it seem that you are using the entire spectrum.
I'm going to dissent from the crowd a bit. The eyes rolled back are startling but don't ruin it they add something. The hose in the tub adds a little reality to it too. The near metal thing is awkward but workable.
It would just be another posed tub shot if she had the typical look in a blank white tub or god forbid tub filled with roses. While I like those as much as the rest this one has a different real and gritty feel.
One could almost believe she is recovering from some enjoyment in the tub. Without having tried to capture that kind of intimate moment.
should have been a good photo - but the eyes spoil it. Also, why not move the shower hose out of the bath before taking the shot. I'm sure you could have got a better angle to keep the silver thing out of the bottom of the shot (handrail?).