This one is fantastic! It has a balance of soft sensuality and fierce intensity. Her pose gives a great set of angles that ground the shot; and are complimented by the waves in her hair. Her attire is elegant and has that sensuality I mentioned earlier. But her expression is fierce and full of energy.
Nice shot. I love your composition. I get comments from people about the way I sometimes "cut off the top of the head" in some of my photos. But seriously, is the top of someone's head EVER the focus? This is a great, sexy picture. I like the grays and I like the placement of your name and the dark contrast of the lettering. The whole picture has nice balance to me. Good job.